A little heart A romance
kept locked away set free
air tight allowed to roam
behind a layer of glass to shop
museum sealed to see the beauty
and certified.
A death-
A life metaphorical
made a toy a reminder-
a ball and paddle made physical
a birdie for your net like a leash and collar
A pair of eyes deep set blue
made dull with time like bottled sky,
with change a contagious smile,
with choice an intake of breath,
a burst of heart,
not a mask of....
but an outlook
what name is given
beneath a layer to happiness,
a memory to a smile that won't fade,
darkening the sky to the memories,
a thunderstorm that are irreplaceable?
in the beauty of summer
A New Beginning
A Faltering
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this one is a little different
it is not read across, please don't read it that way, im afraid it makes no sense that way. its two poems side by side, they are connected to each other- like two different sides. it wasnt exactly what i had planned when i sat down with a pen and paper but it did come out okay. please read one all the way down and then the other all the way to the bottom, yes that are out of alignment, that is exactly the way its supposed to be. this was written for, inspired by: ~Blal |
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i mean that from the bottom of my heart, i love everything about it, even the suspense of waiting for it and the way i almost considered waiting till i got out of work to read it, but after thirty seconds deciding if i waited any longer i wouldnt be able to focus on anything anyway... the suspense of getting just a glimpse before deciding i should read your comment first.. and reading each line and trying to stop from going too fast and letting each little bit sink in, i dont think ive ever loved any literature so absolutely, im considering even hanging it on my wall X3
i feel like skipping! <3
and this:
deep set blue
like bottled sky,
a contagious smile,
an intake of breath,
a burst of heart,
of....
is my absolute favorite verse
and, and, if i am to read into it, i would venture to guess that the left side represents stability and resignation to fate, whereas the right represents instability, change, and awakening
id guess that you see yourself portraying the left and me portraying the right too
but oh my god i love it so much, i wish they had like... super favorites on here, and you can only have one but it would go next to your featured deviation and this would so be there because i love it that much
you made today worth living, and thats an accomplishment in its own right, really... i have plenty of days that im happy about, but there are some days you know youll look back on in the future and say 'this is why im alive'
oh god im blushing! X3 ..thank you so much love, i dont think i could be happier right now <3
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cause that would be awesome
im kind of embarrassed, i kind of feel like i took that last comment a little too far, but i couldnt help it, im having such an amazing day ^_^
im so happy!
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